text-korrektur. könnt ihr mir helfen?

rose--

hey ihr da draußen ????
ich muss in englisch ein referat halten und ich bräuchte das auf grammatik korrigiert und meine lehrerin is wie ein aas-geier bei sowas.

In the usa is having slaves since 1865 Not allowed but the afro-americans were still supressed.
1955 The radial segretion was still put on. That means that black people can’t go in a Restaurant were only white people ate. This was allowed and so it gave one Pool for afro-americans and one for only white people. The can be but it must’nt be. That was allowed, if the public places are the same. But nobody did care about this, so the public places for the people who are black was’nt so good as the for white people. The movement was a really rainbow of actions for getting the same Status as white. A Famous person in the movement was rosa parks. She was driving with the bus and black people had to sit in the back of the bus. If the bus was too fun, black people had to sit up so white can sit on they place.one time Rosa parks said easily no. The thing made many black people to drive not with the bus for 381 days. The afro-americans won attention trough this. In the schools was the racial segretian, too. In Arkansas was one headteacher who did’t allowed there there aero-american kids to come to his school because they were black. 1961 began people to make “freedom rides”. they gone, as example, to Kanada were they can Drive in bus without sitting in the back and then they drived trough America. So they reached that the racial segretation on bus tours trough america is’nt put on. that means, if they do this, they can sit in the front. His big debut Martin luther King had on the marsh in Washington. At this time he had his famous speech “i have a dream“. Like the song, just with i. 1965 the S.N.C.C. had started a program that say blacks must register for choosing they President. Because of this many people go to demonstrations to the capital, but the Police came and caught them. But the Programm had a surprise who noboby in the SNCC thinked. Three months later a Quarter Million people registered for choosing. After Martin Luther King dead, The government now made little Stepps that the aero-americans the same as white people.

sorry, is'n bissle viel aber bitte nehmt euch kurz zeit.

danke im vorraus.
rose--.

tiorthan

Es tut mir leid dir das zu sagen, aber mit "kurz zeit" kann man dir nicht helfen. Dein Text ist nicht korrigierbar. Du beachtest nahezu keine Grammatik. Von der wichtigsten Regel der Wortstellung (Subjekt-Prädikat-Objekt) hast du offenbar nie etwas gehört (oder hast dich nie getraut nachzufragen was damit gemeint ist) und selbst wenn man über deine "kreative" Rechtschreibung hinweg sieht bleiben zumindest für mich große Teile deines Texts völlig unverständlich.

rose--

ok danke. ich merk das nie.

rose. ♥

Flo

Zitat von rose--

hey ihr da draußen ????
ich muss in englisch ein referat halten und ich bräuchte das auf grammatik korrigiert und meine lehrerin is wie ein aas-geier bei sowas.

In the usa is having slaves since 1865 Not allowed but the afro-americans were still supressed.
1955 The radial segretion was still put on. That means that black people can’t go in a Restaurant were only white people ate. This was allowed and so it gave one Pool for afro-americans and one for only white people. The can be but it must’nt be. That was allowed, if the public places are the same. But nobody did care about this, so the public places for the people who are black was’nt so good as the for white people. The movement was a really rainbow of actions for getting the same Status as white. A Famous person in the movement was rosa parks. She was driving with the bus and black people had to sit in the back of the bus. If the bus was too fun, black people had to sit up so white can sit on they place.one time Rosa parks said easily no. The thing made many black people to drive not with the bus for 381 days. The afro-americans won attention trough this. In the schools was the racial segretian, too. In Arkansas was one headteacher who did’t allowed there there aero-american kids to come to his school because they were black. 1961 began people to make “freedom rides”. they gone, as example, to Kanada were they can Drive in bus without sitting in the back and then they drived trough America. So they reached that the racial segretation on bus tours trough america is’nt put on. that means, if they do this, they can sit in the front. His big debut Martin luther King had on the marsh in Washington. At this time he had his famous speech “i have a dream“. Like the song, just with i. 1965 the S.N.C.C. had started a program that say blacks must register for choosing they President. Because of this many people go to demonstrations to the capital, but the Police came and caught them. But the Programm had a surprise who noboby in the SNCC thinked. Three months later a Quarter Million people registered for choosing. After Martin Luther King dead, The government now made little Stepps that the aero-americans the same as white people.

sorry, is'n bissle viel aber bitte nehmt euch kurz zeit.

danke im vorraus.
rose--.

Ich schlage vor, du korrigierst erst mal alle Rechtschreibfehler(53 inklusive die Fehler im deutschen Begleittext), die ich hier fett markiert habe; dann stellst du den Text rechtschreibfehlerfrei wieder ein, damit wir dann eines deiner nächsten Probleme bei der Erstellung von Texten in Englisch tacklen können.
Flo

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