Beiträge von alex90

  • Bitte um Korrektur bei Fehlern.

    Hey also ich hab einiges korrigiert und die eingeklammerten sachen hab ich nicht verstanden weil sie irgendwie keinen sinn ergeben.... da müsstest du dir vielleicht nochmal überlegen was du genau schreiben wolltest ;)

    I write a text about English the world language. I learn English since 8 years. (Mosst lightly falls to me the reading part into English). 340 million people speak English as their mother tongue.
    The number of people who speak english as second foreignlanguage, is not clear.
    English is taught in a lot of countries as the first foreign language in schools and it is the official language of many international organisations.
    There are advantages and disadvantages of the world langugage english.
    Advantages of the language are, that it is everywhere understand, a flexible language, easy to learn and for about 300 Mio. People it is the first language. Disadvantages are different dialects, (small languages might die owt and English) – (speaking countries may have an advantage against other ones).
    There are many discussions about the first language.
    In my opinion English is a nice language and it is easy to learn.

  • handout brauche dringend hilfe

    Hey ich muss in der schule ein komplett fehlerfreies handout abegeben is total wichtig ....:( brauche dringend hilfe ich glaube ich habe einige fehler drin... ich schreib es einfach mal hier her wer es korrigieren kann solls bitte bitte machen.....lebenswichtig

    Course of the war

    • Beginning of the war  April 12. 1861
    • Thanks to General Robert Edward Lee, the confederates are able to punch the Union at the beginning of the war
    • After the bad battle near Siloh the Union had recapture Kentucky and Tennessee and they had the safety aid from their gunboats on section of the Mississippi
    • Lee’s aim was Washington
    • On his way to Washington Lee was stopped at the battle of Gettysburg
     The battle of Gettysburg is one of the important battles in the American history
     In this battle the war got the big rebound
     75.000 confederates fought against 90.000 soldiers of the Union
     Lee wanted to force the Union into accepting the Confederation
     The winner was the Union and General Lee had to start a fallback to Virginia
    • After the fall of Atlanta, General Sherman (from the union) can start his offensive
    • Three weeks later he destroyed the confederates completely
    • The war finished and Lee and the confederate states capitulate at the 09.04.1865


    The consequences of the war

    • The war had positive aftermaths on the one side and negative aftermaths on the other side
    • The worst aftermaths are in the south, the south was totally destroyed
    • Abraham Lincoln wanted to connect the both sides for the unity of the land
    • The republican congress was against that
    • Five days after the end of the war Abraham Lincoln was killed by the southerner Wilkes Booth
    • Lincoln’s follower was Andrew Johnson
    • At first the military was the governance of the south with the influence of the republican congress and then a few politicians
    • At first the military was the governance of the south with the influence of the republican congress and then a few politicians
    • The republican policy controls the American policy
     Their interests are the high finance and industry