Beiträge von Errschaffer

    So hab mir mal etwas mehr Zeit als 10 min genommen und hoffe das ist nun ne bessere Grundlage. :D


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    Perfect Beauties - Inhaltsangabe


    The shortstory „Perfect Beauties“ is about Eddie Lawrence ´s script about the gossip - system in Hollywood.
    Eddie works for the New Century Studios , which is own by Bill Hunt and Pam Hunt, and has his own tv-show. Eddie refers about stars and current movies. All these informations about the stars and movies receives Eddie from Bill Hunt by e-mail. He knows that all the news are gossip and he want to exit the system. He wants to make a break and go to holiday. Travel the world and meet the stars to check facts and to order his life. Eddie wants meet Brad and Elizia for a chat. But someone is follow him. Eddie Lawrence is kidnappe by is old friends from spain. Friends which are works for Pam Hunt. Also there is Jim Duncon , in the story. Jim Duncon wants make animation movies. Jim Duncon wants exit the system too.
    Eddie and Jim Duncon are invent to a cave near the studios. This is a trap. Eddie and Jim must be quit now.
    They are incapable to exit the system.

    This is Eddie´s script about Hollywood.

    Hallo,

    wir schreiben in 2 Wochen eine Englischarbeit über die Kurzgeschichte Perfect Beauties. Ich bin ich Englisch so ziehmlich eine Null. Könnt ihr mal gucken ob diese Summmary wenigstens Grammatisch einigermaßen korrekt ist?

    Laut OpenOffice sind das schon 300 Wörter 0.o. Wir dürfen aber nur 150 schreiben. Jemand Tipps wie das auch kürzer geht?