Hallu^^
Ich brauch mal wieder hilfe bei den Englisch Hausaufgaben.
Da ich momentan nicht so gut bin, möchte ich mit der Abgabe von den Hausaufgaben extra Pluse sammeln, doch dafür muss der Text gut sein.
Ich soll meine MEinung zu Obdachlosen äußern und schreiben, wieso manche Menschen selbst Schuld daran sind, oder/und wieso nicht.
Es wär toll, wenn ich Werbesserungsvorschläge bekomme. =)
Dankö schonma^^
My opinion about homelessness is very different. I think, some people have self quilt (selber Schuld?), because people they drink alcohol or beating their family, have their own responsibility about their life. Other people, which lose their jobs and become throgh that homeless, because of maybe closing their firm, have not self guilt. In my opinion, these people should get a support. I feel sadless with everyone i see on the street, which lookes like a homeless people. But on the other side i could be angry about some of these people because of their behaviour. Some drunk homeless people shout, threaten and want to beat other people. I'm angry of these kind of homeless people. I think, the most of these aggressiv homeless people will never find back into our society. But the other people, whos don't have a bad behaviour, maybe find some time back into the society and have a lucky life. I wish these people the best.