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    Standard Bitte Bitte Bitte mal durchschauen !!!

    Hallo....ich bin in englisch ne echte niete und muss in englisch ein buch vorstellen....das wäre echt ber mega nett wenn sich das mal jemand anschauen könnte was ich versucht habe ....iz zwar mega viel aber bitte bitte schaut euch das mal an....

    Just Like Heaven

    Marc Levy was born on 16 october 1961 in france. Now he works as a author. He lives with his son in london and paris.
    His first romance noval " Just Like Heaven" had marc written for his son. But his sister coaxeded the book send to a bookseller.
    The bookseller had the romance noval released. It was tilled around the world and steven spielberg had the book picturize.
    Marc Levy had written other books too. For example " sieben tage für die Ewigkeit" or "zurück zu dir".

    In sommer of 1966 Lauren, who worked as an doctor, wanted to do holiday by her 2 friends in camel.
    By the way she had an accident with her car. The medical profession adopt her dead. To the way of the hospital Lauren fall out of the barrow through the bounce laurens heard was beat.
    But lauren is braindead. She will be get into the memorial hostpital. Laurenn is in comatose. After 6 month her ghost left the hostpital and she fly to her house where she wanted to do her holiday. The new hirers name is Artuhr Abott.
    He and his friend Paul are possession of a architect´s office. As arthur had a shower in the lat, he heard something of the wall closet. He went to the wall closet and opened the door he saw a women sitting in the wall closet and asked what she are doing there. Lauren is very aproud that artuhr can see her. He is the own.
    Laurren try to explain arthur, that she was dead by an accident and her ghost live in this House. Artuhr didn´t belive this story he wanted that lauren left the flat, but lauren asurred arthur, that he go to the hostpital and look after her body. So arthur went to the hostpital because he think she is crazy. Lauren to be right. Her body is in the hostpital.
    For a long time the doctors decided to put out the devices. But arthur wanted to help lauren. He busy the subject coma for days and nights. But it didn´t help the day where the doctors put out the devices is nearly. Arthur abduct laurens body from the hostpiatl. Lauren won´t that but artuhr put not doing for something.
    One day he drive with a fake letter of referral and a ambulance to the hospital and kidnap lauren.
    He drive with her to his old home town camel.there he has a house.


    Few days later inspector Pilguez get these fall, laureens kippnap body to search. His findings carry to arthur.
    The inspector to pose as a realtor. Asrthur is very leery one time later the inspektor told arthur from themeselves and why he is realy there.
    After a long time arthur told the inspektor the story. At first the inspektor didn´t belive the story but then they decided that the inspector to pick up the body and nobody to tell the story.
    After 3 month the doctors decided to put out the devices and lauren detected that her body is lost. Arthur and lauren think that they see them never.
    But after a week arthur get a message from the inspector he drive so fast in the hostpital because he want to see lauren because she is aroused of the coma but lauren can´t remember arthur so arthur told her the story.

    das wäre echt ganz nett...BITTE !!!

    Gruß
    SunnY
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    Now he works as a author
    an author heißt es

    Besser:He had written his first romance novel (novel mit e nicht mit a) "Just like heaven" for his son.

    But his sister coaxeded the book send to a bookseller.
    But his sister coaxeded him to send the book to a bookseller.

    The bookseller had the romance noval released.
    The bookseller had released the romance novel

    It was tilled around the world and steven spielberg had the book picturize.
    The book has been tilled all around the world and steven spielberg has picturized it.

    In sommer of 1966 Lauren, who worked as an doctor, wanted to do holiday by her 2 friends in camel.
    In the summer of 1996 Lauren,who worked as a doctor,wanted to holiday in camel with her two friends.

    By the way she had an accident with her car. The medical profession adopt her dead. To the way of the hospital Lauren fall out of the barrow through the bounce laurens heard was beat.
    En route she had an car accident. The medical scientists found (was meinst du mit adopt??) her dead. On the way to hospital
    Lauren fell off the barrow and because of the bunt lauren´s heart began to beat again.

    But lauren is braindead. She will be get into the memorial hostpital. Laurenn is in comatose. After 6 month her ghost left the hostpital and she fly to her house where she wanted to do her holiday.
    But Lauren had already been braindead.The medical scientist brought her to the memorial hospital, where Lauren lied comatose.After 6 mnth her ghost left the hospital and she flied to her house to go on her holiday,she had wanted to go before the accident.

    ähm...da sind noch einige fehler nur hab ich leider nicht soviel zeit.

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